Spelling must be corrected; the words 'new' and 'add' are spelt wrong. Changes in the layout will also be needed as the examples are over lapping, the arrows are also pointing towards the wrong things.
I have now completed the tasks you have pointed out, corrected the spelling mistakes and the over lapping to improve my work, so it appeals to the reader.
Spelling must be corrected; the words 'new' and 'add' are spelt wrong. Changes in the layout will also be needed as the examples are over lapping, the arrows are also pointing towards the wrong things.
ReplyDeleteI have now completed the tasks you have pointed out, corrected the spelling mistakes and the over lapping to improve my work, so it appeals to the reader.
ReplyDeletewww. Lauren P5 The comments that you have made on each other’s work show that you have used IT to aid communications, well done.
ReplyDeletewww. an excellent guide. You show for p6 that you can use ICT to effectively communicate information.
ebi: make the changes for M2.